deep and guttural, diffused —
a howl dampened by sagging clouds,
chilled by some october's waning gibbous

this is how I hate you
(sometimes)
though I tell myself and say
otherwise.

* * *

Don't worry, everything's fine. 🙂

4 thoughts on “

  1. Chucka Stone Designs

    I return your hug right back (glad you included a “disclaimer” though). Sometimes we writers just need to work it out right? Regardless of the ferocity of the volatile emotion behind this it is visually just so beautifully written. I had to look up gibbous, had never heard that word before. It is perfect.

  2. artjewl

    Thanks, Jenn. You know how a while back I had said that I had managed to keep from associating any Mraz songs with anyone? well, somewhere along the way, I had inadvertently linked one to an apparently former friend. But I like the song enough to listen to it anyhow. But today, when it played at work, I got this flash of teeth-grinding angry frustration over this person.

    Anyhow, that’s where it came from.

    Glad you liked it… glad you got to give the dictionary a work out too. 😉

  3. zila

    :-Þ

    That is what I think of me getting an RSS feed for my journal. You must WORK to see the rantings of Zila!

    In all actuality, I’m just too lazy to do it. Sorry.

  4. Ginger

    i like the disclaimer too. this was pretty powerful and whenever i post something like that and don’t leave one someone always has to see if i need to be institutionalized or something.

    anger can be a powerfully creative tool, good job working it out, as jenn said.

    xoxo

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